Wednesday, February 10, 2010
Bloooood
hey guys...so i finally got some blood into the poster...Please leave comments...let me know if its working the way it is...or if you think i should have blood in the entire tub? or basically anything i need to do...also im still working on the tutorial for the page turn up. Please leave comments :)
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Hi Erika,
ReplyDeleteI don't think you need more blood at all, I might actually scale back (a little) on the blood on the knife. It is reading more as "gory", rather than the "inflicted pain" angle.
I'd also work on two things:
1. the photo itself seems skewed and needs to be stretched back to the "regular" shape. It shouldn't seem so stretched.
2. The edges of your body vs. the tub (and the filter) are not as seamless as I would like to see - and I would encourage you to work on getting especially close to the edge - so it's not as obvious there is an effect on it.
Great work! I look forward to seeing it tomorrow!!